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| JohnnyR 2005-05-22 ch 1,   | Me likes it a lot, I liked it when I read the hand written version you wrote (Which is the same duh, but it has been a while and I didn't even know you posted) Much love, I liked it. |
| dustytiger 2005-04-12 ch 1, | great work, i really liked this a lot, so well written and powerful, thank you for sharing |
| citrus scented 2005-04-12 ch 1, | oh this is beautiful. This is so incredible, its such a unqiue format as well- and i think its very effective. I just love some of the descriptions you use, so tragic and heartfelt some of them, this is a very emotional piece. ITs also very powerful, love: "I am from farewell, goodbye and I'll see you again" and "From fake blue eyes and ballerina shoes" it really creates a whole world; great style. |