It may not be "profound" but I enjoyed reading it a lot. Keep writing... I've missed your stuff.

God bless.

Aw! This is so sweet! I love it. I think I like the last two lines the best, they really helped you to eloquently end the piece. Keep up the excellent work!~*~AbunaiChikara

That is so cute! Did your teacher like it? They better have given you a good mark for it!