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Reviews For: The Selfish Bitch

bella natty
2005-09-26
ch 1,
abusedeep...yeah
Sad Statue
2005-07-31
ch 1,
abuseI can completely relate to this, and I love the poem.
dark88poet
2005-07-25
ch 1,
abuseI've had the urge to write something like this but never could seem to put my feelings on paper. Thanks for doing it for me.
Chell-o Bodello
2005-07-23
ch 1,
abuseMy mom is pretty much the same way. She's been flipping me off since I was, like, eight and she'll buy my little four-year-old brother whatever he wants but she won't buy me a freakin' guitar! GOD!

Anyway, I'm ranting and I'm sorry. I REALLYREALLYREALLY love this poem! REALLY! It's definitely on my Faves list.

Never stop writing, yo!

~ Lunchi
AlwaysAmberella
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abusewow this is very emotional for me, because I feel my mother is the same way. and I'm not saying that to justify my actions toward her, tI too say it because...its true. Well Well Well Done.

Solo.
LeavingNow
2005-07-11
ch 1,
abuseI've felt that way before-though not as strongly as you. Well put poem-fabulous.
Moon-Chaser
2005-05-10
ch 1,
abuseI think this poem gets the emotions right out there. I think that this poem has a good flow and works nicely. But there is still no excuse, it is a form of abuse. But then I can't talk, I put up with it too. I hope things go better for you.

Keep it up.

Thanks for the review.
whitewave1191
2005-04-22
ch 1,
abusethat's really sad and disturbing. in these types of situations, I often wonder how mothers can act that way. please accept my sympathy and by the way this poem was excellently written.
Rose Marie Wolf
2005-04-20
ch 1,
abuseYou convey your emotions and thoughts well with this poem...
Stories-have-souls
2005-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWell worded. It evokes emotion too.
CW-nerd-12
2005-04-13
ch 1,
abuseooh, familial strains, always a good topic to write about. Anyway, I like it. YOu need to punctuate, though, help it flow better.
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