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| bella natty 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abusedeep...yeah |
| Sad Statue 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI can completely relate to this, and I love the poem. |
| dark88poet 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI've had the urge to write something like this but never could seem to put my feelings on paper. Thanks for doing it for me. |
| Chell-o Bodello 2005-07-23 ch 1, | abuseMy mom is pretty much the same way. She's been flipping me off since I was, like, eight and she'll buy my little four-year-old brother whatever he wants but she won't buy me a freakin' guitar! GOD! Anyway, I'm ranting and I'm sorry. I REALLYREALLYREALLY love this poem! REALLY! It's definitely on my Faves list. Never stop writing, yo! ~ Lunchi |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abusewow this is very emotional for me, because I feel my mother is the same way. and I'm not saying that to justify my actions toward her, tI too say it because...its true. Well Well Well Done. Solo. |
| LeavingNow 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI've felt that way before-though not as strongly as you. Well put poem-fabulous. |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI think this poem gets the emotions right out there. I think that this poem has a good flow and works nicely. But there is still no excuse, it is a form of abuse. But then I can't talk, I put up with it too. I hope things go better for you. Keep it up. Thanks for the review. |
| whitewave1191 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abusethat's really sad and disturbing. in these types of situations, I often wonder how mothers can act that way. please accept my sympathy and by the way this poem was excellently written. |
| Rose Marie Wolf 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseYou convey your emotions and thoughts well with this poem... |
| Stories-have-souls 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWell worded. It evokes emotion too. |
| CW-nerd-12 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseooh, familial strains, always a good topic to write about. Anyway, I like it. YOu need to punctuate, though, help it flow better. |