wow, this is so cool, i really like this one, it made me smile, also because it reminds me of a poem i wrote about hate when i was about 12 where one line was "you are a burnt cookie no one will eat" hah! i still keep meaning to slip that line in my work somewhere, keep a look out for it i say, it's gona be famous! ...

(*returns to rocking in chair*)

x weasel within x

aw very sweet metahpors

wow, nice imagery great job on this sonnet it's very real adn soothing at parts

keep writing!

wow. i like all the metaphors and everything. that's really nice and sweet:) i hope whoever you write it for reads it