it is an epic. my heart weeps. in a good way. -kismet.

just as intriguing, perhaps even more brilliant. bravo, truly.

I love how this is a story. it's so intriguing. really, it was quite spellbinding. I am off to read the next chapter now. really interesting. sort of reminded me of Dante and Edgar Allan Poe.

if you could demonstrate immortality into words you could possibly be immortal.

So lyrical and rich and sad. Continue!

wow. absolutely beautiful. love the originality and the theme.

she’d mothered sons of short-lived kings

Aye... Just so powerful and mystical. Brava.

Wow. I'm speechless. Just beautiful.

she’d sneered and laughed, those ageless eyessnapping of moonshineand the ocean’s impurity.

but immortality is a curse once-done.

Beautiful lines. just timeless. Brava.