the ending was a surprise, but that's awesome. it was fantastic!

SP

Even with very little (albeit well placed) rhyming, this has got a solid groove. The end was a shocker, which made took this from good to super. A little country, stir-fried with teenage angst. Snaps.

this is purely wicked; i love it. I can relate to nearly every single stanza , and you capture jealously perfectly! Wonderful, spiteful ending, great poem.

Wow! I was quite surprised by the ending. Good job.