   Sarahhwithanh 2006-06-11 . chapter 7This is an amazingly cool story. I hope you update soon. |
 Velaineil 2005-07-08 . chapter 7 Again, a nice use of forshadowing. You've made this really suspensful and interesting, can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Velaineil 2005-07-08 . chapter 5 cliffies drive me crazy. |
| Velaineil 2005-07-08 . chapter 4 I like this chapter. Nice use of forshadowing, and it makes you want to hurry and read the next chapter. ^_^ |
| Velaineil 2005-07-07 . chapter 3 Oh, looks good so far. I'll continue with this tomorrow, cause it's definatly *AWSOME*! |
| Velaineil 2005-07-07 . chapter 2 Oh, cliff hanger! NO FAIR! |
| Josh J McDevitt 2005-05-19 . chapter 4 Well Miss Alyssa after reading this (at the junior high cuz im special and my mom let me out half day to hang with Griebel) i have read thru chapter 4 and well... I'm not all cool and that with the *cough* gay *cough* things going on but you know wat THERE WAS A NAKED CHICK |
| Alysse 2005-04-21 . chapter 4 It's such an awesome Idea. I mean like incredible. You sparked my muse darlin'. Thank your friend Clowie for the review..I wouldnt have found this incredible story if she wasnts such an awesome Xanga layout maker!!Hurry up with the next chapter!! |
| Satsuki 2005-04-21 . chapter 1 Hey... nice... I'm gonna have to agree that Erik sounds realli great... u should sell him on e-bay XD *dies because she wants one* ... he he |
| me 2005-04-20 . chapter 4 This story is really awesome! I love it! Keep writing I'm sure you'll get more reviews soon^^ |
| clowie 2005-04-13 . chapter 1 I love this story so far! Erik is sexy..lol..or sounds sexy...w/e works. n.n haha so yeah... update soon! or ill bludgen you with a toaster n.n
love ya |
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