aw this was so cute but i cant believe elijah went back to holly that was just mean lol. great sotry with great songs lol keep it up
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amazing job.

I have read the entire story, and I'm so touched, *sniffle* I have broken down and cried abiut 5 times, this story has truely touched my heart.

I loved the humor involved with it too at times. ^_^

I found errors, but besides that, excellent work! Keep it up!

Miss Sixx Sixx Sixx

Awesome story!! Luv it, can't wait for new stories!!

Oh no and Yay at the same time! On no because its ended and i was so sad to see it go but Yay because it's finished and i really wanted to see the end. That story was great and thanks for the ideas to write it . Will there be a sequel. I'm sure all of your reveiwers will be happy if you decide to make one, if not oh well. Thank you again and i hope all of your stories are this good! J

GREAT ENDING! I FLIPPING LOVE THIS STORY! *HUGS YOU OVER AND OVER AGAIN* ITS GREAT!xox

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW... i love this story!! keep going!xox

YIP! YIP! YIP! YIP! YIP! YIP! YIP!...UM..*LANGUAGE TRANSLATION*...UPDATE DAMN YOU!

That's sad i don't want it to end. Oh well, all good things come to a close. Update soon, 'cos i love it.

hi, this story is really good. please dont stop with the birthday chapter!! i really wanna know what happens so please update soon!

yay an update:P hihi lol

yay!...update!!

I've been reading this story all day and i flipping love it! I can't wait for the update!! OMG!! It's so good!! Please check out some of mine!! THX!! xoxCeeCee

This Chapter was, as all the others were great, you kept me checking every day for your update. The twist was so unexpected, and it made me love the story more.Thanks for replying. You have to carry your story on, or make a sequel!

Lovin your story update soon i haven't got any help to give you your great already, make sure you update soon