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| Manju 2005-10-12 ch 1,  | abusewoah! nice, and darkly beautiful. heh. really good job with the descriptions, dude! ah! my poem Suicidal Thoughts would definitely fit in with this. plz r&r that when you can... keep it up! |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI like the part about a smile, even though it's sad i like it because it makes your poem diffeerent from all the others with a similar self harm theme, bravo x weasel within x |
| HauntedMisery 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on this, I like it a lot! |
| The Magician (Joseph 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it, at least it is not another one of the cry for attention cutting poems. Enjoyable and readable nice job. The Magician |
| mikemc96 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abuseVery deep, soulful, and very sad at the same time. Good work, but disturbing for me, hehe. |
| boy that you loved 2005-04-16 ch 1, | abusethat was very blunt, people need to be hit around the face like that with things sometimes. like the truth for instance. good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh' |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful work, you captured it completely, I think. The flow of the poem is very good, it darws you to read the next line. Keep it up. |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseamazing, simply amazing, I love this. Solo. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseman I hate suicidal people. They get rid of their life cuz they don't want to wait for the happiness to sink in, which takes time. I have been waiting and I get it every now and then. but this is truly great work. great job! ~Sorrow~ |