|Reviews for Slipping Away|
| catseyeview 6/29/05 . chapter 1
"With dew drops like dawn..." just loved the lines that followed, really beautiful
| secret thoughts revealed 6/15/05 . chapter 1
so cool romance is definitely a good topic for you to use youre so good at this keep up the good work
| less-than-imperfect 4/22/05 . chapter 1
too much like a one night stand eh? tsk. there you go folks, one reason why the world is so populated, abortion is a plague and why family planning isn't so effective... because some people have no self-control or are just plain stupid. :P sorry if i offended anyone, but hey, that's my opinion and as far as i know, this country's still a free one.
| Marth Azumi 4/15/05 . chapter 1
Good poem, but I seriously don't think you need to rate it as high as an M. There's nothing really that bad in it. T would be fine, but it's alright, I spose. Just a nitpick.