 Selah Ex Animo 2005-05-04 . chapter 1This was beautiful! I loved it, especially the ending. And the lines:
"And I watch it silently,
Unable to move, unable to speak the words that fight inside my mind,
That’s what made me realize the hazel window is my prison."
Wow. I love those three lines! Very moving... you're staring out the window, and then, with a jolt, realise the freedom you though you had was really an illusion, and you were imprisoned... excellent concept!
Thank you for your reviews!
- Selah |