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Selah Ex Animo 2005-05-04 . chapter 1
This was beautiful! I loved it, especially the ending. And the lines:

"And I watch it silently,

Unable to move, unable to speak the words that fight inside my mind,

That’s what made me realize the hazel window is my prison."

Wow. I love those three lines! Very moving... you're staring out the window, and then, with a jolt, realise the freedom you though you had was really an illusion, and you were imprisoned... excellent concept!

Thank you for your reviews!

- Selah
Rose of Darkness 666 2005-04-13 . chapter 1
Aw, I love how it changes to happy in the ending. Though the transition from depressing to happy was a little shaky...nice poem ^_^
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