another good one. i especially love when a poem has a stinger like this one, i always try to put one (sometimes subconsciously) but you did it very well. beautiful

Speed Strid once said; "You struggle against yourself by living in the dust!"... Think about it.

oh this is nice...an illusional beloved?...good theme...although i think the breaking of the lines could be better to improve the rhythm and readability...

truly yours...

PS: i have a reflection of this poem in my piece Hello Stranger...pls do chack it out...

Oh, beautiful, wonderful! This reminds of something I had experienced before. I can share the pain with you in this poem cause it gets personal! Thanks for sharing this, it was marvelous. Keep up the excellent work!