oh cool, when i was reading this i had this image of someone just standing in the rain. and the story their face told was just explained in your poem, very well written x weasel within x

wow this is a really good poem. i liked it. very original.

thanks for your reveiw. have you ever read the keys to the kingdom? its a series by garth nix. (i read part of your profile. aren't you proud.) eragons going to be a movie? wow!

keep writing!

-k