interesting poem that poses a good question

I love this poem...

I HATEHATEHATEHATEHATE that you said "u" instead of "you" though. It makes it hard to take it seriously.

Love,
~Dia

I like this though I think it would be better if you put 'you' instead of 'u' but other than that it was good - Thanks for the review.

Damn! your good! lol

I really like this, I think it could be longer though.

awesome. i like the last two lines. they put the whole poem together.

i live iowa, and nebraska is only one state away rite?

and i can't sing or play any instrument! i sux! lol

hm interesting

Very nice, Great job, by adding a few more lines, this would make good song as well. Keep up the wonderful work.

A very modern way of expression, with the shortened pronouns. Great work, as always!

I think it's good, but I think you lost something by not spelling out "you."

The only thing that throws the poem off is the tenses.You switch from present tense to past tense and it doesn't work.

Made me feel a kind of quiet resignation. Nice description.

Fade away, its almost a 'kind' way of telling someone to die. Maybe it's just me, but your choice of words really brought that thought to my mind. That's not bad though, it's actually most excellent.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

this is sad , but good

I like this, but why did you not spell out "you"? Not complaining, just wondering. This was great!