Aw... poor guy. .. I feel for him.
Lee

...i commend u on writing a sad ending. i can't do that for the ife of me. although it could have been better if u wrote derrick better. the last few lines didn't really fit with how he had been acting earlier. thaz my understanding of this anyway.

Ooh, the bloody, gutsless idiots. I'd like the crack their heads together. Equally hard.

Sad, nevertheless. Last three lines, are fitting.

That is so sad! But also a wonderful story. I really like it; excellent job.

I liked your story. I love the fact that you represente gay in a postive light, its really nice. Your story was very poetic and brought me to near tears. All I could do was sit stunned watching the computer screen though, excellent story.