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smile for the sunshine
2007-03-15
ch 1,
abuseWow; this is really sad. My mother is an alcoholic and cursed at me a lot when i was younger. So i got the verbal abuse but it wasn't until christmas eve when she hit my brother or i. I'm so sorry that you have to go through that. Luckily I switched custodial parents but now were just scarred on visitations...which the judge just granted. Ya gotta love her. Nonetheless, I really like your poem. I am so sorry for the tradgedy that you've been put through. If you ever need to talk to someone about it, you can message me from my site. My best advice is to never stop writing--its the one place you can be yourself and not have to worry about the past you hide.
watchmefly
2005-04-16
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was really painful to read. But in a good way. In a great way. It was very powerful. I loved it. Keep it up
before-tonight
2005-04-13
ch 1,
abuseomg Krys! Its amazing! i think the only thing is to review the ryhme scheme, sometimes it doesnt seem to flow. but omg.. its so good. *jealous* -Steph
till-the-end
2005-04-13
ch 1,
abuseomgoshh! super god! yay! go krystina! omg i loove it! HAHA...lol..krys, I love this one! second best poem! yay! first is about me...tear tear..lolz -Xox Natalia-
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