Wow thats deep, very interesting. Keep up the good work.

... =blink=... =blink=uh... gender? o-O?ANywho, interesting. Hm. Masochism. =starts laughing for no apparent reason=... =cough= Sorry. . . there's a story about masochism. . . me, a friend, and LJ involved. Don't ask.But anyhow, interesting poem. You have a certain flow and it combines the poem into one fluid glomp of feeling, emotion, masochism, =coughstrainedgigglecough= hurt, pain, =coughcough= (I should get that looked at) anywho. . . interesting. . . (yes, I know, very repetitive. . . that's all that this leaves me with mainly though)Anywho, Ja ne!

How could you write this a then just ditch her tha next day? You guys were great together.

This piece well describes you and her. You hate her too

*gasps* *stands there stunned* I love this! I really like it a lot...I relate right now, this is exzactly what I'm feeling towards someone...Keep it up.--pammy-

aw...you made me happy! ^ - ^