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Daniel 2005-05-10 . chapter 1
Wally, I'm far from being a "toy". Don't worry. I'm still you're friend even if Ruby isn't. Be nice!
LordK 2005-05-05 . chapter 1
This is clever; I like the rhymes. Nice simple, effective rhyme scheme, good metaphors. Looking critically, a few more devices or strengthening your metaphor "someone I used to know" might have improved this a little. But overall, I really liked it, especially the last stanza, very sweet. Yeah, nicely written definitely.
wally 2005-05-01 . chapter 1
Adam Gwen another one of her 'toys' that she supposedly 'loved'. Daniel, don't get molested.
Daniel 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
Who the hell is this guy? Not that I'm jealous...
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