Reviews for Come on little one shine

Felecia 2005-07-18 ch 1,	abuseThat's very sweet and Beautiful.
Needa S 2005-04-26 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful, it would make an awesome song too. Needa S.
ButterNJam 2005-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThat is such an inspiring poem. I love it.
His Only 2005-04-22 ch 1,	abuseOhh! I loved this! It was so cute and it had a nice rhythm to it. Aww- I loved the repetition of it with the words "Come on little one shine." Aww! That reminds me of that song, you know that one where it goes, This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine. This really was excellent. So beautiful and touching! The message too was beautiful. Keep it up! Also I want to thank you for reviewing my latest poem. I'm so flattered that you liked it! Gosh, your comments were just so encouraging. Thanks a bunches! May God Bless!
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-22 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful piece. Reminds me of a couple songs, yet it is still original. I love the way you could turn this into a lullaby or song. Excellent flow and so positive. Great piece. Keep up the great writing.
Aslan Israel 2005-04-14 ch 1,	abuseLoving words, ah, so true.