That's very sweet and Beautiful.

Beautiful, it would make an awesome song too.

Needa S.

That is such an inspiring poem. I love it.

Ohh! I loved this! It was so cute and it had a nice rhythm to it. Aww- I loved the repetition of it with the words "Come on little one shine." Aww! That reminds me of that song, you know that one where it goes, This little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine. This really was excellent. So beautiful and touching! The message too was beautiful. Keep it up!

Also I want to thank you for reviewing my latest poem. I'm so flattered that you liked it! Gosh, your comments were just so encouraging. Thanks a bunches! May God Bless!

Beautiful piece. Reminds me of a couple songs, yet it is still original. I love the way you could turn this into a lullaby or song. Excellent flow and so positive. Great piece. Keep up the great writing.

Loving words, ah, so true.