One word...DAMN!

You're stories are fantastic.

I love how they're written and they're mega sexy.

Have you continued this one?

I wanted to let you know that i love your stories. I have never read this type of story. i usually dont read slash stories but you make your characters so real and so apart of everything. U have made me open my eyes to new types of stories.

oi. wow. again.

wow.

That's so sexy! ...and dirty. The good little Christian girl inside me is ashamed to even admit I read this, but the happy yaoi fangirl inside me can't be denied! In the words of Paris Hilton: "That's Hot." Continue!

holy ** ive never been so turned on in my life i love ur graphic sex scenes wut can i say im a sex fanatic please dont take this story down its awesome i cant wait to read more of it and any other story u may post in the future ur a very talented writer keep up the good work and update soon please!!

Very nice and steamy;) You should only include what *you* want to include. I've written, like...basically zilch het love scenes;)

*yoai fangirl squeel* too sexy! update soon, kay? Excellent story so far and i look forward to the next installment ^^.

Excellent story... has everything i love... THE SEX!! lol. Keep writing your excellent at it.

o very nice and steamy :)

Really good so far, the characters are good and the storyline is different then most stories out there. Keep up the good work.

that was good. i love the descriptive language. However the first few chapters made me think that Mark was a little too naive to be believable.

YES! You posted it on again!

And no ** way! You can't take it off again! I won't let you!

Please please please continue it, don't give up! I'll be helping along, don't worry, I'll be advertising your story in mine if you don't mind.

I mean, your stories are like a stimulant for my ideas, my stories. If I need to write a really hot scene (which I do often) I would just re-read your story and then, BAM, I'll be hot and horny enough to write a really good scene.

Please, please, please keep writing.

-Sugar