Reviews for Save Me, Oh Brave Protector

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follow the night light 2008-07-15 ch 30,	abuse:3 fun! This story is so very enjoyable, please keep writing, its fantasmic! Your writing is awesome too :DD the 'person' is so evil, its heartbreaking Lee's famille is dead.sigh
ick 2008-06-14 ch 8, anon.	abuseFor being the best and the brightest, the cadets sure are stupid **. Lee is unlikeable, easily frazzled, unprofessional, and stupid. However, though I somewhat despise your chosen characterizations (i.e. that you gave your characters the characteristics that they have), your style of writing is commendable; a lot of things seem realistic, though not all, by any extent. The analyzation of the letter in the previous chapter was rather lacking; again i say: 'the best and the brightest'? I'm sure glad that I'm not under their protection. To conclude: good job on the writing, but I can't bear to continue reading with a main character like Lee (no offense to you--it's a matter of personal preference for characters).
naningxoxo 2008-06-06 ch 30,	abuseDamn, this chapter was hella good especially the Bob and Jill thingy...lol. I actually smiled at that. Anyway, Bob is such a freakin DICK, did he have to be one? No. Was he born one...no, but he was born with one... Getting distracted, Bob is a freakin little ** who doesn't deserve Betty. Make him suffer, even kick him in the stomach a little. Hmmph. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Damn right. :)
The Happy Carrot 2008-05-16 ch 30,	abuseOh my god... I know who it is.. :) It's DAVE! Now... my dear lady.. you must update to prove me right! my love always to the amazing writer you are..:) -THC
AMM3485 2008-05-04 ch 30,	abuseLOVE THIS STORY! Ryan's and idiot for pushing her, I love the Doctor Who drop ins that you place sporadically and i do agree David Tennant is absolutely gorgeous. I can't believe you killed her family :( Ryan and Lee never did talk about her dad. What continent is Montage on anyway? I absolutely loved the Bob and Betty chat, I think Julianne was bloody hilarious. I can't wait for the next update. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
city-gal77 2008-04-25 ch 30, anon.	abuseIt's going great so far! Wow. Loving Ryan. Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please!Update please! ...annoying, I know...but please?!
monichi 2008-04-21 ch 30,	abuseso the killer is... DAVE? o.O"" bwa haha. anyways. LOVED this chapter. absolutely adored the conversation between ryan and jules. Bob and Betty xDD AHAHA
markymark 2008-04-13 ch 30, anon.	abuseplease update
xMsxUnlucky92 2008-04-13 ch 30, anon.	abuse-too lazy to sign in- HAH! I KNEW IT WAS HIM EVER SINCE YOU INTRODUCED HIM! HA HA HA! [All that watching CSI has gotten me pretty good at noticing this kind of stuff.] But there's absolutely no way, I think, that Lee can just barge in there and save the day. I mean, she's a continent away. Unless she somehow caught a flight... during a power outage... yeah... ANYWAY. Pfft, if I was Lee I would've been like, "Dave, you're creepy, I think you're a murderer, so I'm going to shoot you in the knee cap." Yep yep. I wouldn't let ANYBODY mess with my real and surrogate family, that's for sure.
personwithaccount 2008-03-27 ch 30,	abuseGASPS. why? i mean sure the person is obvious but WWHY? sorry i couldnt read sooner. the story's going great though. and bless your soul, poor thing. college does not sound like fun. holy hell and brimstones i'm going to be one sad puppy senior year. i graduate 09. good luck to you though. TORCH. huh. funny word. took me a long while to get it. my american self is kinda slow to respond to a word like torch.
s-pecial-lee me 2008-03-10 ch 30,	abuseaww i love this story. tis awesome, but did you HAVE to make it so drastic that Lee lost her family? i was crying! c'est tres tragique. look at my rocking french!! lol just wondering, do you speak french and italian? or are you researching it as you go? oh oh oh, i'm aussie too! but from your a/n's i'm deducing you're from melbourne? i'm a WA'er. yay. the ending of this chapter had me thinking that dave was the culprit cuz he sucks at scrabble. but that might just be me and my weird mind. anyways, update soon! can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens!
xoxokristen 2008-03-05 ch 30,	abuseso is it David or what?
RunFree 2008-02-24 ch 30,	abuseReally good...plz continue...
rosieroo 2008-02-21 ch 30,	abusethanks for the update! yay for you! okok i have my ideas about who this stalker person is... update soon! im still loving the story!!
Genato 2008-02-20 ch 30,	abuseupdate. please. i can't wait to find out. too exciting.

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