aww, no, they have to end up together, please tell me that is not the end of ryan and lee!! great few chappies though, i can't wait for more! cya soon hopefully ~ Alenor

Just got all caught up with this again and still loving it...you still find ways to rock my socks...

Nat
(NEW PEN NAME...it was bound to happen sooner or later ;))

This last chapter was great. I liked the way you showed all the emotions. I hope they will end up together in the end. Keep up the awesome writing!

Oh. The sadness in this chapter just brings me to tears. and the fact that he just walked away? gah... i really hope that is not the last of ryan. I don't think i could cope...well i probably could but that is beside the point... patiently waiting for an update... love soph

SO

I've been forced to review a different chapter.. because i've already REVIEWED the last one..

you realize when someone says "soon" it means.. SOON.. not.. 5 months later?

Just in case you didn't, i'll forgive you.. as long as your writing the next chapter...

you are writing it.. aren't you?

EXCELLENT..

that's what i like to hear..

Now.. update... SON

and we won't have a problem!

Deal?

DEAL!

-THC

OMG! PLEASE update! that was so heart-breaking.

epilogue. EPILOGUE. crap it. have mercy.

poor tortured elliot. i feel kinda bad for ryan too. unsuspecting idiot, really. they really did fall into that cliche without realizing it. it just took some stupid behavior on ryan's part resulting in ripping out elliot's heart and throwing it in a paper shredder for them to realize it, eventually.
with all the eavesdropping in this chapter im surprised it didn't end with someone watching it all from the window..
so where exactly did melody saunders go, because it seems far too long for her not to show up if you are actually going to create something with her character and ryan. not that i would particularly mind. it almost doesn't seem right for him to end up with elliot. he doesn't deserve her at this point. even though he doesn't really have to be faithful to her because it's not an actual relationship, and he even gave her permission not to be faithful, you kinda want to hit him for doing that to her- lee- because really even though he was just being a stupid drunk, you feel sympathy for lee and the fact that if they do end up together, it's really going to suck for her because he's such a jerk sometimes. but maybe that's just my opinion.

so, im sitting here, enjoying the romantic interaction between lee and ryan and then, just to ruin how happy it makes me that he's not being a complete idiot i remember melody saunders, or whatever the chick's name was that gave ryan the butterflies he'd never felt before. please tell me i read that wrong, because even if he does end up with melody, it's most definately ruining what lee and ryan have now for me.

ps. well written, with few grammar mistakes and interesting character developement. kudos

with the way he is behaving, i'm surprised she hasn't gouged his eyes out. i definately would have..

Please say they end up together. :D Update soon!

wah!! please update soon! i don't think i'd be able to sleep at night without knowing what would happen next. pls, pls update
jj

yayness i was so surprised to se you had updated at all! Well it was an awesome chapter but too sad, I mean seriously why oh why did that stupid boy Ryan have to break up with her and why oh why can she just not tell him she can't live without him, don't you just hate this part in books and movies? Well I hope Ryan finds his 'niche' in life soon so him and lee can get back together, update son =D

you updated!XP

that was... hmm. the previosu chapter was great, this one was ryan-wtf-are-you-doing. lol:))

anyway, i still hope they get together in the end. soon.^^

- che

wow two chapter's so close together, so this the end?