wow i absolutly LOVE THIS STORY! it so deserves more than 500 reveiws! It deserves about 50! far OUT! i hope u update soon!

Well! This was a welcome surprise... I hope in that big Imaginative, Creative head of yours, you are planning out another chapter. And it seems that if you do not produce another chapter... I will have to use that creepy Egyptian Vase my mom has to put the ashes of your cerimoniously burt Armadillo! DONT MAKE ME!

haha anyways

I miss you :)

haha

I have to say: That was awesome. Great plot, your characters are very distinct and easy to remember. I was hooked! I also had a few friends check it out and now we're on the same boat.

Pure brilliance...

you know what... i was crying when i found out they died cuz avery and ray are awesome... also, i was crying since lee is being such an idiot! I'M SERIOUS! i wanted to knock some sense into her. I mean give him a chance, he deserves it... when i first found out that he cheated on her, i was like that bitch... and i'm one to hold grudges... but once he started being all tender and i could feel the emotions, i just flat out got hysterical when lee kept refusing him... DAMMIT I WANT TO SWEAR AND CUSS AND PRETTY MUCH MAKE LEE UNDERSTAND! FUCK FUCK FUCK! also, i can't wait until you update... hopefully it won't take a few more months... i'm really hoping it wont's since i stayed up until 7:02 am... since i haven't been reading fictionpress... dammit... this chapter is probably going to haunt my thoughts... dammit my mom's coming and my sister might wake up from my typing... gotta go!

oh gosh, i started crying and a pain in my chest welled up after i read that chapter...

i'm a bit confused about the royal family. who is who? and why don't some of them have last names? why was nicholas announced first when he is neither youngest or oldest. and is his name nicholas or ryan? cause i'm really confused with that.

ok;p

so IS the girlriend dead?

ryan has i BAD. and he's so pitiulright now, u should make lee chase him in the end;p vindication!

keep up!

-che

Quite surprised I was when you did kill of those three. I was kind of getting attached to them. I did catch that line that Lee said and I was like yes yes...no! When she didn't say it. Dang it. I think I know who did the car bombing! hehe. Well update soon this story is quite good. I understand Lee's situation and think she's acting exactly as she should.

oh m gee! they're going separate ways. it hurts to see both of them all depressed. hope it gets resolved soon.

OMG...what a time to have "the talk"...jeez, you would think that ryan would have a little more finesse. Yes I was attached to her sibilings...you're mean. But I'm sure it'll prove to be necessary. Can't wait for more. and congrats on the nomination! You deserve it.

luv it!

Yeah, not cruel or sick my arse.

But whatever. I suppose I could let you live for a little while longer... P

the tension

really enjoying this! gr8 writing please continue!

The story keeps getting better and better. I love it. Would you like cookies or pie with your ice cream?