Reviews for Dragon and Wolf - FictionPress.com

Chole Asterion 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abuseIt's a very interesting story here. I think the first lines introducing the dragon and the wolf would make a nice opening poem to this story. To keep the story from getting repetive you might want change the structure of your sentences, like putting in a vew adjectives or adverbs. But very good job.
Erika Darkmoon 2005-04-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, good story. Work on the dialogue spacing though. It's not "Blah blah blah." "Blah blah blah." (sorry to use blah) there's a space in between."Blah blah blah.""Blah blah blah."And so forth. However I loved the story and I believe you did a very good job. Check out my profile.
MakaiOverlord 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept, combining two changeling types into one story. The story reads easily enough, except during speech. It is usually proper to go to a new line when another characer talks.