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| narcoleptic dreaming 2007-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseNow with this poem I can definitely relate. ;D Having written Adrien over these past few months, I know exactly where this is coming from. There's nothing really much I can say, since you pretty much covered everything there is in this poem. There were two stanzas in particular that I really liked: "So gentle I seem So caring and warm - But the Hunger inside me Rolls like a storm." and "I'm losing myself In these shadows of death. One day I'll be gone, The beast will be left." They flowed smoothly and were very accurate. :D Great job! |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWow... I wonder why no one reviewed... this is really good! The rhyme scheme flowed well... and the theme was well stated... well done! |