beautiful hunny

beau in the extreme - i love it lots :) xia x

I really liked this poem. This is sort of how I feel at this point in my life. I can so relate. Keep up the awesome work.

AWESOME! This poem rocks! I love it muchly:) Great job. The italicized parts are really great, and help out the piece greatly. Nice reasoning/logic comes through in the piece, get across the confusion really well (if that makes snese to you:) I try to be sane, it doesn't always work sometimes). Kudos!

Wow - I really liked this. My fave line has to be the following: "Do me something; Make-believe with me" Very nice line there, keep up the great work!! :)