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| wishes21 2005-07-30 ch 1,   | this is good! i like the rhythm and the repeating words seem to add more impact to the whole poem at the end. keep it up. |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2005-04-15 ch 1, | BAD **! I love it! |
| Angel Underneath 2005-04-15 ch 1, | o now this i like, i like the beat and i like the words and i like the concept i like! *wow* |