This is good i could imagine someone trying to keep the beat to the music. A nightclub or sumthin. to rock the boat yeah, nice. well good one.

Aweosme. Totally wicked. Loved it. *adds to favourites* There is someting about the raw emotion...great job.

I could try a wack sala to this...I imagine a tight beat over a good verse ;)

hmm interesting, very upbeat, like i'm imagining sum1 dancing high spiritedly in some nightclub, the old fashioned kind, nice poem