Just a tad cheerleady. :)Deep down the emotions area all right, though.

uh okay a little repetitive there, eh?

Ok...? This really should be Bush's campaign song. Hopefully as poorly-sung as it is written.

Holy shit! Do you write Bush's speeches? I was about to gouge my eyes out because my senses were getting drunken silly in patriotic ferver. You can keep your Bruce Springstein bullshit - just don't have us suffer from it.

- Holocaustpulp

This was absolutly excruciating. This doesn't have a point and you repeated the same lines I dunno how many times. That was the down fall.

Way to repeat youself a whole bunch of times. Let's see, this piece is one hundred and sixty-nine words long, yet you used a grand total of only thiry-seven different ones! Repeating yourself that often is completely unnecessary. In any case, poorly written and fails to make a valid point.