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| Paige Angel Lenaigh 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it, kinda... even though I don't agree with your views it is fun to review and then laugh at you behind your back! *snickers evilly*... I love you? |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThere's a lot that I would prefer not to comment on because, though a christian, I have slightly differing views concerning matters of faith touched upon in the story, and I try to avoid conflict. I would say that I liked the rose and thorns symbolism, as well as the way her weapons became an insecurity after she was saved. Did burying them symbolize anything? On a more objective note, the setting was slightly confusing. First I thought it was modern day realistic, then original fantasy, then primitive early A.D. . . . The gun especially throws me off. Anyway, well-written, over all. The first person perspective worked well; I don't think the story could have been told any other way. |
| Love like a Rose 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOh i love this! it is very good :) I love the irony of her name being Rose too, though that was sort of planned, i suppose? |