Reviews for The Girl Of Your Nightmares

TMM 2005-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI think the whole poem would have more emphasis if you took out the word am in the very last line and put a comma after I. But good job on the rest.
di-11199111 2005-09-26 ch 1,	abusea very honest poem, its so charming. can u give me lessons??
Nianko 2005-06-16 ch 1,	abuseThat's a familiar feeling.Yeah...I relate.Great poem,well writen. NK
Bong2 2005-06-06 ch 1,	abuseI can't say I relate in the point of view you are writing from but from the dude's perspective I can relate, as cocky & mean as it sounds. But I liked this poem nonetheless, It made me think. I'm no jerk or anything like that but sometimes, you prefer what you prefer. Good Poem, keep it up... Poetically Yours, B.Rosser
Short Lived Dream 2005-04-23 ch 1,	abuseI can relate, LOL. This was very good. I can really feel the tension and the way that she might be watching him or that she wish she could. It speaks to me and I liked it alot as you can tell. Hope to see more of your writing ~DarkRoxy