Hey, Nat! Dunno if you remember me, but we met at the FNCC, a few years ago. Saw you yesterday performing this piece at the celebration, or at least a likeness of it.

Very powerful and intense. Felt it then, felit it when I read it. Awesome. Purely.

incredible! it completely deserved to win!

nice poem! can i comment on spacing tho? when u upload the doc and go to quickedit/preview, to single space use shift enter... like make it so two lines are on the samae line then right between them hit shift enter. sorry, hard to describe :S but that should single space it for you. nice poem btw :)

that's incredible! you da** well better win!

maybe you could change the last line to 'this is how i lead my life!'just a suggestion. i thought it was really good.