Reminds me of the Wall.. :)

well now the 3rd chapter has me to keep reading, SO KEEP WRITING

Poor Chris, no one came to his house. Though the introduction of the reptile creatures into his life is quite intriguing. Can't wait for more. And sorry about the extreme delay and reviewing stuff. Keep up the good work

Good chapter keep writing.

Mat

AWesome chapter Chris is a very cool character so far maybe he will turn out like something more weird though.

Ma†

Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to see what happens next.

Hey, This is really good I like chris he seems pleasant but it's really sad he's alone.I know usually your stories don't ever have happy endings so I guess he'll stay should do another chapter! MidnightLynx

I really liked it!

A little werid but...I liked it!

Well this is pretty cool a little deranged but honest joe work which means it should be!But yeah I liked it!

This story is awesome. Awesomeness it is the description is great.

Ma†

Wow...this is incredible. Poor Chris. My favorite line: His life had become eternity and all eternity was, is a maddening haze of loneliness and confusion.

That's brilliant. Great job.

Katlyn

That is easily fixable, you use the Backup/Export and you pick whichever story you want to edit. I use it all the time. (THank God for it!) Well done again. You have some talent. - Your not that bad, though I think WORMS was your best so far. :P I like creepy stuff like that, though in regards to that maybe you should make that a bit longer. :)

!* Noelle *!