way cool.

Bob, tis me, emma B2

i ish confused. very confused. update so i shall not be confused! yay!

Hey there, Xock, is me, Taisa! Yayness!

I like this so far, quite dark, but still good. I like the way it starts off, with the whispering of the word and such... is the angel of death Jennifer, or is the little girl? Methinks the chibi, since Jennifer is not really a suited name for the angel of death... Anyway, it's quite good, and hope to see more soon!

Ta,

Taisa

Sounds familiar

Er, Bobatron... it's very good! Aye! But, one teeny problem... a word, dark-haired girl, is like this:

darkhairedgirl

you should fix it.

I think you need a better title, but that's just me... if it works for you, it's fine. Also: is that an actual dictionary thing? Cuz it'd be cool if you actually wrote what was in the dictionary... OXFORD.