this is an interesting song. This has a great flow. It would sound even greater with a chorus in it.

~Sorrow~

Hmm, you are a very mysterious writer! :) I'm not sure what the message is here- or maybe it's that I don't want to know. Anyway, since your profile says you accept all comments... I just wanted you to know that "casted" isn't a word. It's already past tense as "cast." Since it's a song, though, maybe you just changed the word so it would fit the beat.I hope I was helpful and not annoying, in any case. Keep polishing that marvelous writing of yours!~Annie