Aww... this was so emotional! You were always able to convay feelings well. Your imagery and wording really struck something inside of me... *hugs*

~ CoolBeans

You did far more than an "ok" job with it. I'm so glad to see you move beyond the form of haiku and doing that so well. Terribly sad poem in some sense... definitely something I could relate to. Wonderfully done. Definitely a message many should take to heart