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Reviews For: The Lost and Found

starflames
2005-05-17
ch 1,
i liked that. of course, i like doing that too... going through peoples stuff and all. you had nice descriptions of all the stuff too, and i could just imagine it all in the lost and found box in our clinic last year.
i was a postcard
2005-05-01
ch 1,
LOVE this! I am one of those people who likes peeking into random people's lives, and I have *always* liked lost and founds. Looking at an item and thinking about the person who owns it, how they got it, how they lost it, what it does or doesn't mean to them...and you hit it so well here. I would not change a thing.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
2005-05-01
ch 1,
oh wow, i love the ending of this, it's weird cause when i was around 8 i had a blue notebook and wrote poems and songs... weird, anyway, i do like this, i like how you give some feeling and background to the objects, i had a lil trouble trying to picture where the items WERE until you mentioned the cardboard box, but that's my only critisism, happy writting x weasel within x
heroin zombie
2005-04-29
ch 1,
When I first starting reading this I was all "wow this is gonna be awesome" but it slowly got more and more... how should I say... repetitive. It's too long. Way too long. Get through the contents of the L&F quickly, in narrow technolatry and imaginative concentration, then move on to the sad emotion of the end.
tears-of-eternity
2005-04-16
ch 1,
wow. that was just lovely.
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