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Saxifrage
2005-07-05
ch 3,
abuseAWW! That is so sad! im really glad you updated at last! it was an awesome chapter! It seems to have a lot of things going on at once, just like it happens in real life. that was really mean of kate's parents to pack up first before even talking to Kate. GRR parents are so stupid. >.< hmph. lol, anyways, I caan't WAIT till you update again! have a loofa for updating!! ^_^
Anonymous11
2005-05-07
ch 2, anon.
abuseReally brings me back to being a kid. The dialogue is really funny and the writing is really good. To be honest though at the end of chapter 2 I was a little bit disappointed with the girl punching the boy in the mouth. It seems rather cliche'
poetictragedy234
2005-04-21
ch 2,
abusei think the girl acts like shes older then third grade, but otherwise this is good
Saxifrage
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abuseOH I like this story. ^_^

this is getting interesting! what's going to happen next? You need to update soon! and dont you forget about this story either!! update or suffer the wrath of visious rabid wombats!...and the pink frilly death too! *GASP*

XOXO Saxifrage
KillerOfClocks
2005-04-17
ch 2,
abusehaha... That's really adorable! ^__^ Though I was thinking the fifth grade where all that stuff happens-at least when I was in my elm school. You should get some kids to test read it and see what they think.
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