"Silver steak knife, Carving sadistic calligraphy" My favorite line. The best part of this poem was the description and how it created an extremely clear image. I saw a girl crying at the foot of her bed with her hands clasped together like she was praying and crying. I'm astounded!

powerful

wow, some kick ass imagery,kinda creepy in a way...I have nothin bad to say about it, so...there.

loved it, especially the way you incorporated the prayer into it. It gave me chills, keep up the good work

great!i have a poem somewhat like that ive considered posting and now i think i will