|Reviews for Unreal|
| Out-Of-Reality 8/26/05 . chapter 1
"Silver steak knife, Carving sadistic calligraphy" My favorite line. The best part of this poem was the description and how it created an extremely clear image. I saw a girl crying at the foot of her bed with her hands clasped together like she was praying and crying. I'm astounded!
| simpleplan13 4/21/05 . chapter 1
| zamthezombieman 4/20/05 . chapter 1
wow, some kick ass imagery,kinda creepy in a way...I have nothin bad to say about it, so...there.
| sweet raptured light 4/16/05 . chapter 1
loved it, especially the way you incorporated the prayer into it. It gave me chills, keep up the good work
| xoxoMizzatxoxo 4/16/05 . chapter 1
great!i have a poem somewhat like that ive considered posting and now i think i will