o that was cool. and fun...bet you never heard that from this kind of story.. im just in a different mod thats all...

bbyeLiz

Oh! I love how I don't know exactly what's going on, yet I can still feel the intensity, the depth. Nice job!

wow... that was interesting... a little creepy i admit, but kinda cool too. i like this.

thanks for reviewing me.

wow... cool...

Oh, very noir! And attention catching. Lovely work!

This just...it was so random, but excellent! Your works are just amazing, and how the character handles the situation, it actually left me quite surprised.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

very interesting , is there more?

wow this is great man! and thanks for your review!!

This is very interesting. Is it only a one shot? Doesn't this girl that seems so unfraid intrigue the vampire? Cause I'm certainly intrigued. Hope you update, luv Kaitx

Wow. Different. You should develop this into a story of some sort. I'd read it.

o this sounds so good so far! I really like it and the cliffhanger at the end... i hope you continue this!

one comment: you wrote "pray" and that is pray as to the gods... you meant "prey"

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews! Especially for "Drawing Him In" : )

I love it. Great descriptions.

Not bad. Enjoyable and quite dark, although not reaching into the true darkness.

Good setting, good message. Great Job!

awesome story

So, the gut is a vampire and he is going to kill this girl, but he decides not to.

Questions, Is this a one-shot? Or will there be more?

I loved how it was so poetic at times and you got right back into the action with more prose-type speaking. I also love how you use your words.

It did seem though, that you were rushing the story a bit. Try to take your time in future chapters.

I liked it alot, and I really want to know if there is going to be more. Overall, I'd give it an 8 out of 10, just for the rushing part. Other than that, it was great.