Oh! That was so...Oh! That was awesome, and it happens all the time! You did a great job...the ending was my favorite part (made me think of Rath...hm...). I can't wait to see more poems Love, they get better everytime!

Morbid Maxwell- "You sound like a boy about to have an orgasm..."

i like this...nice imagery and these words are very powerful...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

Fascinating, I love how true to life this is. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.