Reviews for Brought of Hate and Brought of Rage

AngelBabyWingz85 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abuseI wish you spaced this poem out on verses, or was it meant to flow like that, crushed together in hate?
life like whoa 2005-04-21 ch 1,	abuseI'm speechless. This poem released so much angsty energy I felt it when I was reading it. This was an amazing write! I must say one of your bests!!
His Only 2005-04-17 ch 1,	abuseOohh! Wow. Somebodies upset :\| I'm not gonna chide you and say you shouldn't say those things as a Christian cuz I feel the same way about my dad, although I might not put it so bluntly. lol. I can see you put in LOTS of emotion- the point was very clear and kinda scary too the way you described it. All in all it wasn't a bad poem. The rhyming worked really well. I hope to read more happy poems next time though :) Catch you later Jesse. God Bless!
Zephyr Zaelza 2005-04-17 ch 1,	abusewow...I'm at a loss for words right now...just wow...great descriptions in this one, all the anger and pain you put in here is felt by your readers, great job! Keep it up! -Zephyr Zaelza