Wow Rune-san I think this is wonderful ^__^... keep it up, can't wait to read more of your work

Hey. This story is awesome. Please write more. I like the charactors.

It sounds very interesting, so I'll have to keep reading when future chapters are release. I've already put the story on my favorites list. I don't really like that it's written from Morgans point of view, but I guess my opinion wouldn't make you jump up and change it. As for the actual writing, pretty good. For the most part it flows properly; doesn't sound like a little boy with impared comprehension skills is writing it. You missed a few commas, but eh, who likes commas anyway? Very good job, I like it.