Chilling.

And beautifully put into words.

You are an amazing writer.

Keep it up!

;)allie

Oh, I hope you keep going. I love it. *puts it on her favorites and waits eagerly*

Hmm...(And yes, that is all I will say. xD It's a good thing, 'kay?)

That was really really good. There was a certain sadness to it...i don't know if you meant for it to be sad but it was very well written. Update soon!

Omg, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the way you've written this! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! Nice and sweet. I'm so in love with your writing style...

I love this so far--great introduction, and addictive descriptions, and there's that silent empathy between the two that has me begging for more. Will there be more? I certainly hope so.

Awed,

-JP-