This was amazing! You don't suck! This was so cool! Nnd I'm not saying this to be nice. It sounds to me like you're an obssesive writer. You just can't stop because you love it so much. So am I. Like I said, this was so cool. Keep writing!

~Black and White Dreams~

Sounds like that dude has got some issues. He's crazy. iI got to go. Nice story. Oh, a quick thing of adv ice, T rated stories get better reviews thatn M rated. Because people see them often.