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| spooky200112 2006-11-12 ch 1,  | abusewo... wow... this is very... wow! i can relate to it so much, its almost scary! I love you and your poems! I have to be your biggest fan! again... wow! |
| Medea 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love that one. I think that really everyone knows "that smile" and uses it once in a while... ;) |
| GothicBallerina 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHey that reminds me of Breathless (haha u said that aout ur poem) I really like it. it's sad but sweet at the same time. i dunno, i'm wierd |
| GravitationDreams 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI comlpletely know what this poem is talking about. I do the exact same thing almost every day. Good poem. |
| Hidden Lies 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love this one! it is truly great! I think everyone has felt like that, you express yourself really well! |
| Warrior Wraith 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem alot! I especially like the last few lines where you say that you're begging for someone who really cares! it's so true! It's like, everyone asks you if you're ok, but they only do it because they feel they should. they don't care, not really. Keep up the good work, and thakyou for your reveiw! |
| citrus scented 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseoh sad! I know the feeling, you get your emotions across well; really touching. love the repition, it sort of enforces the fakeness and all. "I smile to cheat on me and the world" great line! |
| inferno tempest 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseit was great, there is no other word to describe it! |
| Eirien 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWonderful piece, I really like this, it is well written and I can relate to it. Many people feel this way. The poem reminds me a bit of my "Emotionl make-up" which is about the same thing. (I think it should be "But ON the inside" instead of "at", but I might be wrong. Anyways a really good poem. |
| QueenVixta 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI like this, very well written. I know how this feels and you wrote about it in such a great way. QueenVixta |
| cOnfuzed-pOet 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseVery true. |
| HiddenFlame42 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI care liefje! *hugs* Fave line: "I smile to cheat on me and the world" - great image there! |
| withprettysmiles 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abusecan be very true...nice ending. |