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| sleeping Pisces 2006-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseSo many important questions, so little anwsers. Not much to say about this one, but I did like it. Peace, Daze |
| Charity F 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWEll? WOULD YOU??!?!?! LOL!!... very nice dear, very nice...well, what more can i say? loved it! |
| Arutha 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWriter's block!? Oh no! Haha, well at least I can read one of your less recent ones I haven't made it to yet ;P I love this poem! One of my faves of yours. All the more negative questions make me think of a really good friend my sister had that turned on her. Tragic :( Man, I just love your use of language in this, and the questioning theme is awesome. Wow, what a great poem; keep it up ;P |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat rhythm, love the use of questions. Good work. |
| Thyrt 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseawesome! there's always doubts in relationships..love how you put it |
| simpleplan13 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abusei like it |
| eviljackinthebox 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseYeah, there's quite a few problems with flow, and your rhyming isn't too original... I mean, I love the images, but I think you should rework this into a free verse, or a more complex rhyming poem. Just my thoughts. Love you, keep writing. |
| jus-me 2005-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was wonderful... so incredibly true.. gotta admit I've wondered the same things myself on more than one occasion... Cass |
| WarriorHeart 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abusei liked it... it kinda came out harsh, but in the sense that it's all about not getting hurt. nice job. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAh, questions I ask all the time. For spur of the moment, the rhythm is pretty good. Your questions are set deep within the mindset of humankind and echo the centuries of unrest and doubt. |