|Reviews for Unraveled|
| scudcrow 4/18/05 . chapter 1
Great imagery summed up in short lines...shows how time can take its , order rests even in the world of chaos.
Je l'aime, very well written!
| Forsakn 4/18/05 . chapter 1
pretty imagery C i don't know if this was done on purpose, but how the last words of the first and last lines rhyme gives it a really nice touch.
| youzi 4/17/05 . chapter 1
Very poignant.. loved the image of 'a moth-worn sweater In a dusty attic room'. keep writing D
| Xi Hou Jun 4/17/05 . chapter 1