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| Taper-Jean-Girl 2005-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis a a beautiful piece of writing, and I like the way you kept the young girl and the boy simple and to the point, You made a good effect by not naming them in the beguinning. This looks like its going to be a touching and detailed piece and I'm looking forward to hearing more from this story, good luck - Hayley x |