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| xDistortedReALiTyx 2005-04-20 ch 1,  | abuse*cheers* *claps* This is awsome! I love it, amazing imagery and stuff...this reminded me of one of my friends...tis awsome, keep it up.--pammy- |
| aeolyn 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the way you portrayed the girl as a dead water lily. It made it easy to understand more about the girl and how she's feeling. And I loved the line "An empty frame without the picture." |
| Taper-Jean-Girl 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you compared the girl floating in the water to a dead water lilly, It gave me a better overall view of what I thought she might have looked like, and saying that she was hollow inside helped me to feel what she was feeling. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry- Hayley x |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. Very pretty language, yet still strong and with a deep meaning. |