I really liked this story! UGH! You have to finish it. It's such a cool and interesting idea. :] Seriously, I loved it. It enthralled me.

I really like the story. Keep writing!

I really like your story and hope you continue soon.

The world's gunna end! -swoon- We should all be put in corsets to show how *weak* women really are.

-scowel-

I still hold that they're either decended from French people or in the part of what use to be Europe where France stood.

Aww... I'm actually starting to feel sorry for the poor jerk! You have a habit of doing that to people in your stories. :p

"Three long, sharp, shining, flat pieces of stone slide out of his elbow, stopping inches from my chest. Rippling like flames, they resemble deadly animal claws, sweeping, sleek, masculine, but delicate at the same time."He's not a hyena; he's a Wolverine! ::falls over laughing:: ::Does the ricola commercial yodel:: Ni-co-laah!! Sorry, couldnt resist

You know, you know, you know... if she keeps this up, she's gonna give Flickerswift a run for his money, na!

Weel, at least he's to the point of pondering things like 'culture' for the Lebete. -pokes his hair- ^^ I like!

Ah. That makes so much more sense. Thanks for clearing that up for me.Anyway, I like this chapter too... I'm enjoying watching our hero and I like the way his mind works.

Can't wait for the next chapter, I might review again when I have time to do a real review. Thanks for putting this story!

I can't wait until Indre wakes up fully and realizes that males are slaves, and females are the top. XD That'll be priceless.

I'm really enjoying this story. For the most part I think your ideas are well formed and the concept is very interesting. Just a few details I had a problem with, that I think going over with Word's spelling/grammar checker or another similar program would help.

1:Talking about the shower stalls. You say 'Too tall for any big, too shallow and narrow for any horse'. So my question is any big what?

2: Also with the shower stalls, talking about turning them on. The sentence 'I oblige and watch him fingering the stone flowers, expertly carved in graceful curves he turns them, and I feel a cold, wet splat on my head.' could be rewritten. I would suggest 'I oblige and watch him fingering the stone flowers, which were expertly carved in graceful curves. He turns them, and I feel a cold wet splat on my head.' Breaking it into two sentences makes it clearer, and much more obvious that he's turning them, but not in graceful curves. Unless he really IS moving them in graceful curves, in which case, forgive me.

Those are my two gripes. Otherwise 'tis a lovely story. Keep up the good work!!

Were-hyenas! -places her book of Captain Blood as a bet-

Ho-boy. I want the girl to get shaped up, using weapons and then when he sees her, he'll go 'Oh Noes! You Ruined Her!'. -giggle-

Bouda are genetically transformed humans who have different culture and technology from the rest of the humans?

neitzsche? he came up with the culture?

I thought I knew what she meant, but now that you ask, there seems to be more to it.

the point of view changes to a different species and a totally different culture! wow, very creative ^_^